The Project Corner: "Freaks" - Part 7
Here are the latest PDF pages of "Freaks". To catch up with how we got here, you can check out the previous pages here. I liked the writing of these pages but in terms of the script as a whole, the pacing is pretty slow. At the very least, I need to add another tense scene in the first 40 pages. As it stands, these pages seem capable but aren't exactly competent since they don't exactly move us forward as fast as we should be going in a horror film.
