Well here's where it all falls apart. I'm not sold on this set of pages and it's the beginning of 15 - 20 pages that I think I need to revamp in order to make some sense out of this project. It's at this point in the script when the POV changes from the Townies to the Freaks. We get a glimpse of just how nutty the "normal" people are and the Freaks have to figure that out before it's too late.

There are a bunch of little issues but the biggest hurdle from this point is: why would the Freaks stay around? I think I have some decent enough answers but I'm still not thrilled with it. I might work on these pages later this week and repost the new version on Sunday but I doubt it. Odds are that these will be them until some later date when I don't have any new projects that I want to work on.

So if you just want to read the latest pages, here you go.

To read the whole thing so far, it's right here.

Or you can just click below, download nothing, and read these pages on this site.